Typical Story!

22 Aug

I composed the poem late at night yesterday.. I think i shoud edit it again.. For the meantime, enjoy reading and tell me what do u think..

Gotta a tale to tell,
Of one lonely boy
Living down the hill..
Sometimes he just sits
Playing an old guitar,
Or watching sunset!
Oh what a lonely boy he is!
Once, he sat for an hour
All by his own,
Painting a flower
Without thorns..
In his way back,
A girl hath passed..
He stopped, so she did..
He gazed and knelt
She smiled.. He melts
And that was all of it!
He felt like saying something,
He just couldn’t.
He wanted to spell it out,
It just wouldn’t.
So to his place he went
Wrote down every word he meant..
A year hath passed….
And that letter was never sent!
In two thousand and nine
He thought he is already fine,
Out of the blue, she came out..
He couldn’t believe what’s what!
But he thought to himself:
“This should come to an end”
Hence, he stepped forward
Stood like in self-defense,
He said words and words
Plenty of them!!
But to be honest,
He’d never regret what he said
He regrets what he didn’t!


10 Responses to “Typical Story!”

  1. mejo August 22, 2010 at 9:34 pm #

    its nice i like it.

  2. منيره المطيــري August 25, 2010 at 12:24 am #

    you are a great writer and I love what you are writing
    you are a creative girl ^_^

    • girltalksloud August 30, 2010 at 12:06 am #

      And i think u r a creative blogger too..
      To those who don’t know Miss Munera, plz pay her a visit.. U won’t regret it 😉

  3. besbes August 28, 2010 at 10:48 pm #

    love it ….
    I was singing it instead of just reading :d
    you’re so much talented masha’allah 🙂

    • girltalksloud August 30, 2010 at 12:23 am #

      Thnx Besbes
      Can’t wait 4 ur single hit 🙂

  4. rmrm September 13, 2010 at 4:45 am #

    I really like it
    It’s great
    I wish we will see more and more from u
    regrets >>> sweet endings

    • girltalksloud September 13, 2010 at 7:08 pm #

      More poems r n the way.. keep watchin Rmrm
      The happy endings surely will b here one day at a time 🙂

  5. king.of.bling.bling November 2, 2010 at 10:24 pm #

    Hello y’all,
    This is a good poem,I really liked it.
    I wish I could write the same.
    All the best for you dear and keep up with the good work.
    Best Wishes,,,

    • girltalksloud November 19, 2010 at 10:15 am #

      Thnx King
      I bit u can write even better 🙂

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