Typical Story!

22 Aug

I composed the poem late at night yesterday.. I think i shoud edit it again.. For the meantime, enjoy reading and tell me what do u think..

Gotta a tale to tell,
Of one lonely boy
Living down the hill..
Sometimes he just sits
Playing an old guitar,
Or watching sunset!
Oh what a lonely boy he is!
*****
Once, he sat for an hour
All by his own,
Painting a flower
Without thorns..
In his way back,
A girl hath passed..
He stopped, so she did..
He gazed and knelt
She smiled.. He melts
And that was all of it!
*****
He felt like saying something,
He just couldn’t.
He wanted to spell it out,
It just wouldn’t.
So to his place he went
Wrote down every word he meant..
A year hath passed….
And that letter was never sent!
*****
In two thousand and nine
He thought he is already fine,
Out of the blue, she came out..
He couldn’t believe what’s what!
But he thought to himself:
“This should come to an end”
Hence, he stepped forward
Stood like in self-defense,
He said words and words
Plenty of them!!
But to be honest,
He’d never regret what he said
He regrets what he didn’t!
😦

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10 Responses to “Typical Story!”

  1. mejo August 22, 2010 at 9:34 pm #

    its nice i like it.

  2. منيره المطيــري August 25, 2010 at 12:24 am #

    you are a great writer and I love what you are writing
    you are a creative girl ^_^

    • girltalksloud August 30, 2010 at 12:06 am #

      And i think u r a creative blogger too..
      To those who don’t know Miss Munera, plz pay her a visit.. U won’t regret it 😉

  3. besbes August 28, 2010 at 10:48 pm #

    love it ….
    I was singing it instead of just reading :d
    you’re so much talented masha’allah 🙂

    • girltalksloud August 30, 2010 at 12:23 am #

      Thnx Besbes
      Can’t wait 4 ur single hit 🙂

  4. rmrm September 13, 2010 at 4:45 am #

    waw
    I really like it
    It’s great
    I wish we will see more and more from u
    regrets >>> sweet endings

    • girltalksloud September 13, 2010 at 7:08 pm #

      More poems r n the way.. keep watchin Rmrm
      The happy endings surely will b here one day at a time 🙂

  5. king.of.bling.bling November 2, 2010 at 10:24 pm #

    Hello y’all,
    This is a good poem,I really liked it.
    I wish I could write the same.
    All the best for you dear and keep up with the good work.
    Best Wishes,,,

    • girltalksloud November 19, 2010 at 10:15 am #

      Thnx King
      I bit u can write even better 🙂

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